English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 30 minutes
Punctuating dialogue correctly
Punctuation
CCSS L.7.2CCSS W.7.3.BEngland: KS3 English (punctuation)England: GCSE English Language Paper 1 Q5 (narrative writing)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Punctuating dialogue correctly.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • Tom asked, "Where is my coat"? • Tom asked, "Where is my coat?" • Tom asked, Where is my coat? • Tom asked "where is my coat?" (Tom asked, "Where is my coat"? / Tom asked, "Where is my coat?" / Tom asked, Where is my coat? / Tom asked "where is my coat?") → Tom asked, "Where is my coat?"Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • "Can I help," asked the shopkeeper? • "Can I help? asked the shopkeeper." • "Can I help"? asked the shopkeeper. • "Can I help?" asked the shopkeeper. ("Can I help," asked the shopkeeper? / "Can I help? asked the shopkeeper." / "Can I help"? asked the shopkeeper. / "Can I help?" asked the shopkeeper.) → "Can I help?" asked the shopkeeper.Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • "I love this song", whispered Priya. • "I love this song." whispered Priya. • "I love this song," whispered Priya. • "I love this song whispered Priya." ("I love this song", whispered Priya. / "I love this song." whispered Priya. / "I love this song," whispered Priya. / "I love this song whispered Priya.") → "I love this song," whispered Priya.Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
Hook · 3 min
- Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
- Share the objective: Punctuating dialogue correctly. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which line of dialogue is punctuated correctly? • "Watch out!," shouted the coach. • "Watch out"! shouted the coach. • "Watch out!" shouted the coach. • "Watch out," shouted the coach!
- Step 1: Spoken words go inside quotation marks; separate them from the speaker tag with a comma (or ? or !), and start each new speech with a capital letter.
- Step 2: An exclamation mark goes inside the quotation marks, and no comma is added.
- Step 3: So the answer is: "Watch out!" shouted the coach.
- Answer: "Watch out!" shouted the coach.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which line of dialogue is punctuated correctly? • "I'm going to be late" said Mia. • "I'm going to be late," said Mia. • "I'm going to be late", said Mia. • "I'm going to be late." said Mia. ("I'm going to be late" said Mia. / "I'm going to be late," said Mia. / "I'm going to be late", said Mia. / "I'm going to be late." said Mia.) → "I'm going to be late," said Mia.Prompt: Punctuation at the end of spoken words goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
- Read the question and choose. Why do writers often use verbs like 'whispered' or 'snapped' instead of 'said'? (to avoid using quotation marks / to make sentences shorter / because 'said' is incorrect / to show how the words are spoken) → to show how the words are spokenPrompt: Think about how dialogue looks on the page of a novel.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which line of dialogue is punctuated correctly? • The sign said, "no entry". • The sign said, "No entry." • The sign, said "No entry." • The sign said "no entry". (The sign said, "no entry". / The sign said, "No entry." / The sign, said "No entry." / The sign said "no entry".) → The sign said, "No entry."Prompt: Punctuation at the end of spoken words goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
- Read the question and choose. What should happen when a speaker's words run over several paragraphs? (open quotation marks at the start of each paragraph, but close them only at the end of the speech / close and reopen the marks in every sentence / use no quotation marks at all / start a new speaker tag every line) → open quotation marks at the start of each paragraph, but close them only at the end of the speechPrompt: Think about how dialogue looks on the page of a novel.
Watch out for
- Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
- Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue.
- Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.
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