English lesson plan · 6th grade (Year 7 in England) · 30 minutes
Proofreading for punctuation
Punctuation
CCSS L.6.2CCSS L.6.2.BEngland: KS2 SATs GPSEngland: KS3 SPaG
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Proofreading for punctuation.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Apostrophes for possession; Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue; Commas in lists
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Apostrophes for possession; Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue; Commas in lists). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which shows possession correctly? the changing room of the players (the players changing room / the players's changing room / the player's changing room / the players' changing room) → the players' changing roomPrompt: Who is the owner? One owner or more than one?
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • Grandad said, "it's time for bed." • Grandad said, "It's time for bed." • Grandad said, It's time for bed. • Grandad said "It's time for bed". (Grandad said, "it's time for bed." / Grandad said, "It's time for bed." / Grandad said, It's time for bed. / Grandad said "It's time for bed".) → Grandad said, "It's time for bed."Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
- Which sentence uses commas correctly? • Bring, a pencil, a ruler and an eraser. • Bring a pencil a ruler and an eraser. • Bring a pencil, a ruler and an eraser. • Bring a pencil, a ruler, and, an eraser. (Bring, a pencil, a ruler and an eraser. / Bring a pencil a ruler and an eraser. / Bring a pencil, a ruler and an eraser. / Bring a pencil, a ruler, and, an eraser.) → Bring a pencil, a ruler and an eraser.Prompt: Commas separate the items in a list.
Hook · 3 min
- Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
- Share the objective: Proofreading for punctuation. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: On tuesday we went to the zoo, we saw lions. How many punctuation or capital-letter errors are there?
- Step 1: Proofread in stages so you notice every kind of error.
- Step 2: 'Tuesday' needs a capital, and the comma splice needs a full stop or semicolon.
- Step 3: So the answer is: 2
- Answer: 2
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- On tuesday we went to the zoo, we saw lions. How many punctuation or capital-letter errors are there? (1 / 2 / 3 / 4) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
- The childrens' coats were wet so they hung them up. How many punctuation errors are there? (0 / 1 / 2 / 3) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 5 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Sam bought milk eggs and bread at the shop How many punctuation errors are there? (1 / 2 / 3 / 4) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
- "where are you going asked Mum. How many punctuation or capital-letter errors are there? (1 / 2 / 3 / 4) → 3Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
Watch out for
- Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
- Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Apostrophes for possession.
- Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-6.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder