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English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 30 minutes

Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.4.2.ACCSS W.4.5England: Y4 Writing (paragraphs)England: Y3/4 Writing (evaluate and edit)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choose the best concluding sentence; Topic sentences and paragraphs

Leads to: Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 4 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choose the best concluding sentence; Topic sentences and paragraphs). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (Water is wet. / That is why everyone should try to save water. / Taps can drip. / Fish live in water.) → That is why everyone should try to save water.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
  2. Volcanoes form where hot, melted rock pushes up through the Earth's crust. Over time, layers of lava and ash pile up. Some volcanoes grow into huge mountains. Which sentence would make the best ending? (In short, volcanoes are mountains built by the Earth's own heat. / Have you ever eaten lava cake? / Mountains can be snowy. / I visited the beach last summer.) → In short, volcanoes are mountains built by the Earth's own heat.Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.
  3. ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Teamwork is a word. / Football is played with a ball. / Some pupils prefer reading. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?

Hook · 3 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 7 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Robots help people in many ways. (2) Some robots build cars in factories. (3) My brother's bike is blue. (4) Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans. (5) Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.
  • Step 1: The paragraph is about: "Robots help people in many ways." One sentence is off the topic.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: My brother's bike is blue.
  • Answer: My brother's bike is blue.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 6 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Exercise is good for your body and your mind. (2) It makes your heart and muscles stronger. (3) The Moon goes round the Earth. (4) It helps you sleep better at night. (5) It can also make you feel happier and calmer. (It can also make you feel happier and calmer. / It makes your heart and muscles stronger. / The Moon goes round the Earth. / It helps you sleep better at night.) → The Moon goes round the Earth.Prompt: Read the first sentence: it tells you what the paragraph is about.
  2. Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Recycling helps protect the planet. When we recycle paper, fewer trees need to be cut down. Recycling metal cans saves energy. (Recycling plastic keeps it out of rivers and seas. / On land, they waddle or slide on their bellies. / Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans. / Colourful toucans fly between the trees.) → Recycling plastic keeps it out of rivers and seas.Prompt: What is the paragraph about? Look at the first sentence.

You do: independent practice · 7 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 3 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Penguins are birds that cannot fly. Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming. Some penguins can dive more than 500 metres deep. (Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm. / Jaguars hunt along the riverbanks. / On land, they waddle or slide on their bellies. / We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.) → On land, they waddle or slide on their bellies.Prompt: What is the paragraph about? Look at the first sentence.
  2. Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Penguins are birds that cannot fly. (2) Eagles build huge nests on cliffs. (3) Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming. (4) Some penguins can dive more than 500 metres deep. (5) On land, they waddle or slide on their bellies. (Eagles build huge nests on cliffs. / Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming. / Some penguins can dive more than 500 metres deep. / Penguins are birds that cannot fly.) → Eagles build huge nests on cliffs.Prompt: Read the first sentence: it tells you what the paragraph is about.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choose the best concluding sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

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Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?

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  1. Question 1

    Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Robots help people in many ways. (2) Some robots build cars in factories. (3) My brother's bike is blue. (4) Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans. (5) Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.

    • A. Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans.
    • B. Some robots build cars in factories.
    • C. My brother's bike is blue.
    • D. Robots help people in many ways.
  2. Question 2

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Robots help people in many ways. Some robots build cars in factories. Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans.

    • A. On land, they waddle or slide on their bellies.
    • B. Recycling metal cans saves energy.
    • C. It makes your heart and muscles stronger.
    • D. Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.
  3. Question 3

    Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Getting ready for a sleepover is fun. (2) First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. (3) Volcanoes can erupt without warning. (4) Next, choose a game or a film to share. (5) Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow.

    • A. First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush.
    • B. Volcanoes can erupt without warning.
    • C. Next, choose a game or a film to share.
    • D. Getting ready for a sleepover is fun.
  4. Question 4

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? The Amazon rainforest is home to amazing wildlife. Jaguars hunt along the riverbanks. Colourful toucans fly between the trees.

    • A. First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush.
    • B. Tiny poison dart frogs live on the forest floor.
    • C. It makes your heart and muscles stronger.
    • D. We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.
  5. Question 5

    Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Penguins are birds that cannot fly. (2) Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming. (3) Eagles build huge nests on cliffs. (4) Some penguins can dive more than 500 metres deep. (5) On land, they waddle or slide on their bellies.

    • A. Eagles build huge nests on cliffs.
    • B. Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming.
    • C. Some penguins can dive more than 500 metres deep.
    • D. Penguins are birds that cannot fly.
  6. Question 6

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Sea otters are clever tool users. They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests. Then they smash shellfish against the stone to open them.

    • A. It helps you sleep better at night.
    • B. The tomatoes are bright red and ready to pick.
    • C. Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans.
    • D. Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm.

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Answer key: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?

  1. 1. C. My brother's bike is blue.

  2. 2. D. Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.

  3. 3. B. Volcanoes can erupt without warning.

  4. 4. B. Tiny poison dart frogs live on the forest floor.

  5. 5. A. Eagles build huge nests on cliffs.

  6. 6. D. Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm.