English lesson plan · 11th grade (Year 12 in England) · 30 minutes
Words for tone and attitude: indignant, sardonic, conciliatory…
Vocabulary
CCSS RI.11-12.6CCSS RL.11-12.4England: SAT Reading and Writing (Text Structure and Purpose)England: AP LanguageEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q4
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Words for tone and attitude: indignant, sardonic, conciliatory….
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Word choice that reveals a writer's attitude; Tone and mood
Leads to: Satire, parody, caricature and deadpan
Materials: Word cards, A thesaurus or dictionary, A short text with the target words, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Word choice that reveals a writer's attitude; Tone and mood). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Is the proposed answer correct? The writer is fond of the old car: "Grandad's ___ old car still runs." → battered (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: Decide whether the writer's attitude is positive or negative.
- Choose the word that best conveys the writer's attitude. The writer approves of the plan's cost: "The scheme is ___." (cut-price / stingy / economical / cheap) → economicalPrompt: Decide whether the writer's attitude is positive or negative.
- The empty swing creaked in the wind. Grey rain fell on the abandoned playground, and the last leaves dropped from the trees. What is the mood? (melancholy (sad and lonely) / playful / joyful / exciting) → melancholy (sad and lonely)Prompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
Hook · 3 min
- Show an interesting word in a sentence and ask what it might mean from the clues around it.
- Share the objective: Words for tone and attitude: indignant, sardonic, conciliatory…. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which tone word matches this description? showing deep respect
- Step 1: Precise tone words let you describe a writer's attitude exactly in analysis.
- Step 2: reverent: showing deep respect
- Step 3: So the answer is: reverent
- Answer: reverent
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which tone word matches this description? hopeful and confident about the future (optimistic / conciliatory / indignant / detached) → optimisticPrompt: Think about whether the attitude is positive, negative or neutral, then how strong it is.
- Which word best describes the speaker's tone? Both sides have raised fair concerns; surely we can find a solution that respects them all. (earnest / conciliatory / optimistic / contemptuous) → conciliatoryPrompt: What feeling do the speaker's word choices and punctuation reveal?
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which word best describes the speaker's tone? I still picture my grandmother's kitchen, warm with bread, and wish I could step back into those summers. (earnest / detached / nostalgic / indignant) → nostalgicPrompt: What feeling do the speaker's word choices and punctuation reveal?
- Type the tone word (in English) that matches this description. mocking in a grimly humorous way → sardonicPrompt: Think about whether the attitude is positive, negative or neutral, then how strong it is.
Watch out for
- Picking a "bigger" synonym that doesn't fit the meaning.
- Ignoring the clues in the rest of the sentence.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Word choice that reveals a writer's attitude.
- Use concrete materials: word cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Satire, parody, caricature and deadpan.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-11.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder