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English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 30 minutes

Choosing the detail that best supports a point

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.7.1.BCCSS W.7.2.BEngland: KS3 Writing (paragraphing)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choosing the detail that best supports a point.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 4 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. ___ Volunteers collected 300 kilograms of rubbish, planted wildflowers and built two benches from recycled plastic. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Benches can be made of wood. / Rubbish is bad. / Last weekend's clean-up transformed the riverside park. / Wildflowers are colourful.) → Last weekend's clean-up transformed the riverside park.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
  2. Topic sentence: "Sleep is essential for learning." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (Some beds are more expensive than others. / During sleep, the brain stores what we learned that day. / Tired students find it harder to concentrate. / Teenagers need around eight to ten hours a night.) → Some beds are more expensive than others.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
  3. ___ Octopuses can open jars, escape from tanks and even recognise individual people. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (The sea is very deep. / Octopuses are among the cleverest animals in the sea. / Octopuses have eight arms. / Jars can be hard to open.) → Octopuses are among the cleverest animals in the sea.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?

Hook · 3 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Choosing the detail that best supports a point. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 7 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?
  • Step 1: The best support is relevant (about the point) and specific (facts, figures, examples).
  • Step 2: Survey evidence directly shows demand for the change.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  • Answer: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 6 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point? (The canteen opens at 12.15. / Some students bring packed lunches. / In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week. / Vegetables come in many colours.) → In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?
  2. Read the question and choose. Point: "Video games can build useful skills." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some games are very expensive. • Many games have beautiful music. • The first video game console went on sale in 1972. • Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead. (Some games are very expensive. / Many games have beautiful music. / The first video game console went on sale in 1972. / Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.) → Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?

You do: independent practice · 7 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 3 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Point: "Short breaks during study sessions improve concentration." Which detail best supports this point? (Breaks are popular with everyone. / Some students study in their bedrooms. / Timers can be bought cheaply. / Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.) → Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?
  2. Read the question and choose. Point: "Teenagers need more sleep than adults." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some teenagers have bunk beds. • Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults. • Many adults drink coffee. • Sleep is important for everyone. (Some teenagers have bunk beds. / Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults. / Many adults drink coffee. / Sleep is important for everyone.) → Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choosing the best topic sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Choosing the detail that best supports a point

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  1. Question 1

    Point: "Wildflower verges help bees." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.
    • B. Some wildflowers are purple.
    • C. Mowing verges is noisy.
    • D. Bees can sting.
  2. Question 2

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Learning a second language has benefits." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities. • Spanish has many speakers. • My aunt went to Portugal. • Some languages use different alphabets.

    • A. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.
    • B. Spanish has many speakers.
    • C. My aunt went to Portugal.
    • D. Some languages use different alphabets.
  3. Question 3

    Point: "The town needs a pedestrian crossing outside the primary school." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Many parents drive cars.
    • B. The school was built in 1962.
    • C. The road is called Station Road.
    • D. There have been four near-misses involving children at that spot this year, according to the police.
  4. Question 4

    Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many people walk their dogs there. • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. • The park has a duck pond. • The park opened in 1901.

    • A. Many people walk their dogs there.
    • B. Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.
    • C. The park has a duck pond.
    • D. The park opened in 1901.
  5. Question 5

    Point: "Short breaks during study sessions improve concentration." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.
    • B. Timers can be bought cheaply.
    • C. Breaks are popular with everyone.
    • D. Some students study in their bedrooms.
  6. Question 6

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Teenagers need more sleep than adults." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many adults drink coffee. • Sleep is important for everyone. • Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults. • Some teenagers have bunk beds.

    • A. Many adults drink coffee.
    • B. Sleep is important for everyone.
    • C. Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.
    • D. Some teenagers have bunk beds.

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Answer key: Choosing the detail that best supports a point

  1. 1. A. Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.

  2. 2. A. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.

  3. 3. D. There have been four near-misses involving children at that spot this year, according to the police.

  4. 4. B. Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.

  5. 5. A. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.

  6. 6. C. Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.