English lesson plan · 5th grade (Year 6 in England) · 30 minutes
Choose the strongest conclusion
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.5.1.DCCSS W.5.2.EEngland: Y5/6 Writing (endings)England: Y5/6 Writing (composition)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Choose the strongest conclusion.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Choose the best concluding sentence; Choose the best summary of a short text
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choose the best concluding sentence; Choose the best summary of a short text). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (Owls can turn their heads. / In conclusion, owls are amazing night-time hunters. / Some owls are brown. / Owls have big eyes.) → In conclusion, owls are amazing night-time hunters.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
- Honeybees live in colonies of thousands. The queen lays the eggs. Worker bees collect nectar and pollen, look after the young and guard the hive. Drones have one job: to mate with a queen. Every bee has a role that keeps the colony alive. Which is the best summary? (Bees are the most amazing insects in the world. / Drones are male bees. / In a honeybee colony, the queen, workers and drones each have a job that keeps the hive alive. / Worker bees collect nectar and pollen.) → In a honeybee colony, the queen, workers and drones each have a job that keeps the hive alive.Prompt: A summary is short and covers the WHOLE text, not just one part.
- Volcanoes form where hot, melted rock pushes up through the Earth's crust. Over time, layers of lava and ash pile up. Some volcanoes grow into huge mountains. Which sentence would make the best ending? (Mountains can be snowy. / I visited the beach last summer. / In short, volcanoes are mountains built by the Earth's own heat. / Have you ever eaten lava cake?) → In short, volcanoes are mountains built by the Earth's own heat.Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.
Hook · 3 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Choose the strongest conclusion. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Bees pollinate many of the crops we eat. Sadly, in many places their numbers are falling. The good news is that people can help by planting flowers and avoiding pesticides. Which is the strongest conclusion for this article?
- Step 1: Strong conclusions sum up, reflect or call the reader to act; weak ones just stop or add random facts.
- Step 2: So the answer is: Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
- Answer: Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- What kind of ending is this? In short, bees pollinate our crops, make honey and keep wild plants growing. (sums up the main points / calls the reader to act / reflects on a feeling or lesson) → sums up the main pointsPrompt: Does it tell the reader to do something, sum up facts, or show what a character feels or learned?
- Sam had always been scared of the sea. All summer he took swimming lessons, one nervous length at a time. On the last day of the holiday, he swam out to the rocks beside his sister. Which is the strongest ending for this story? (And that was the story of Sam. / As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more. / The sea is made of salt water. / Then Sam went home and had dinner.) → As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.Prompt: A good ending links back to the main idea or the beginning.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Our school should have a 'no car' day once a week. Fewer cars would mean less pollution at the gates. The roads would be safer, and walking or cycling would help pupils get fit. Which is the strongest conclusion for this letter? (One day a week without cars would give us cleaner air, safer streets and healthier pupils, so please say yes. / Cars have four wheels. / Some people drive to school. / Thank you for reading my letter about stuff.) → One day a week without cars would give us cleaner air, safer streets and healthier pupils, so please say yes.Prompt: A good ending links back to the main idea or the beginning.
- What kind of ending is this? Kai hugged his new dog and realised that home was wherever Pepper was. (sums up the main points / calls the reader to act / reflects on a feeling or lesson) → reflects on a feeling or lessonPrompt: Does it tell the reader to do something, sum up facts, or show what a character feels or learned?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Choose the best concluding sentence.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-5.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder