Concision
7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 16 questions · Common Core: L.7.3.A · England: KS3 Writing, ACT English (Concision), SAT Reading and Writing
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Question 1
The scientists worked together collaboratively on a joint project. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. The scientists worked together collaboratively on a project.
- B. The scientists collaborated together on a joint project.
- C. The scientists, working together, collaborated jointly.
- D. The scientists collaborated on a project.
Question 2
She returned back to the house in order to collect her keys. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. She went and returned back to the house to collect her keys.
- B. She returned back home to the house in order to collect her keys.
- C. She returned to the house to collect her keys.
- D. She returned back to the house to collect her keys.
Question 3
The two twins look exactly identical to each other. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. The twins look identical.
- B. The two twins look exactly the same identical.
- C. The twins look exactly identical.
- D. The two twins look identical to each other.
Question 4
The meeting will begin at 9 a.m. in the morning. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. The meeting will begin at 9 a.m.
- B. The meeting, at 9 a.m. in the morning, will begin.
- C. In the morning at 9 a.m. the meeting will begin then.
- D. The meeting will begin at 9 a.m. in the morning time.
Question 5
The meeting will begin at 9 a.m. in the morning. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. In the morning at 9 a.m. the meeting will begin then.
- B. The meeting will begin at 9 a.m. in the morning time.
- C. The meeting will begin at 9 a.m.
- D. The meeting, at 9 a.m. in the morning, will begin.
Question 6
Due to the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed until a later date. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. Owing to the rain that was falling, the match was postponed until a later date in time.
- B. Because of the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed to a later date.
- C. Due to the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed until later.
- D. Because it was raining, the match was postponed.
Question 7
The two twins look exactly identical to each other. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. The twins look identical.
- B. The two twins look identical to each other.
- C. The twins look exactly identical.
- D. The two twins look exactly the same identical.
Question 8
Due to the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed until a later date. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. Because it was raining, the match was postponed.
- B. Owing to the rain that was falling, the match was postponed until a later date in time.
- C. Due to the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed until later.
- D. Because of the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed to a later date.
Question 9
In my personal opinion, I think that the new library is very unique. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. Personally, in my opinion, the new library is unique.
- B. In my opinion, I think that the new library is very unique.
- C. I think the new library is unique.
- D. I personally think in my opinion that the library is unique.
Question 10
She returned back to the house in order to collect her keys. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. She returned back home to the house in order to collect her keys.
- B. She went and returned back to the house to collect her keys.
- C. She returned to the house to collect her keys.
- D. She returned back to the house to collect her keys.
Question 11
She returned back to the house in order to collect her keys. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. She returned back home to the house in order to collect her keys.
- B. She went and returned back to the house to collect her keys.
- C. She returned to the house to collect her keys.
- D. She returned back to the house to collect her keys.
Question 12
The scientists worked together collaboratively on a joint project. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. The scientists worked together collaboratively on a project.
- B. The scientists collaborated on a project.
- C. The scientists collaborated together on a joint project.
- D. The scientists, working together, collaborated jointly.
Question 13
The two twins look exactly identical to each other. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. The twins look exactly identical.
- B. The two twins look exactly the same identical.
- C. The two twins look identical to each other.
- D. The twins look identical.
Question 14
In my personal opinion, I think that the new library is very unique. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. Personally, in my opinion, the new library is unique.
- B. In my opinion, I think that the new library is very unique.
- C. I personally think in my opinion that the library is unique.
- D. I think the new library is unique.
Question 15
Due to the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed until a later date. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. Because of the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed to a later date.
- B. Owing to the rain that was falling, the match was postponed until a later date in time.
- C. Due to the fact that it was raining, the match was postponed until later.
- D. Because it was raining, the match was postponed.
Question 16
She returned back to the house in order to collect her keys. Which revision is the most concise?
- A. She went and returned back to the house to collect her keys.
- B. She returned back home to the house in order to collect her keys.
- C. She returned back to the house to collect her keys.
- D. She returned to the house to collect her keys.
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